9.13.2015

my mom told me to never self-diagnose myself


i remeber when you pushed me off,
then the Fall came.
i still remember the bitter chill of the air
and ever since then then i haven't stopped falling
and what's funny is that you think I'm talking about love
but thats where i fell from

I remember how the air got colder and my bed got warmer and seemed to be the only thing that wanted me to stay around for lunch.

and i feel dumb for just talking about some "teen love story" but we all go through it eventually because we've gotta learn how to get our hearts broken some how & i've always wondered why people mostly write poetry about heart break. but I guess it's because the best stories are always behind our scars. 

 now the trees are changing again and the stems are getting weak at the knees
and I've always envied the leaves because at least they hit the ground at somepoint



I got sick with the change of the season
the doctor said it's just a cold
but it feels a lot more like nostolgia



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13 comments:

  1. Delilah PiperSeptember 14, 2015 at 12:21 AM

    "I guess it's because the best stories are always behind our scars." <3

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 14, 2015 at 6:06 AM

    WOWOWOW. i'm in love with this post

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  3. Carter J PrattSeptember 14, 2015 at 6:27 AM

    This is great! I love your posts, keep it up

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  4. Solstice EverstonSeptember 14, 2015 at 2:22 PM

    "because we've gotta learn how to get our hearts broken"

    You're right. You're so right.

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  5. Scarlet AmourSeptember 14, 2015 at 4:52 PM

    "I've alwys envied the leaves because at least they hit the ground at some point" amen.

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  6. NelsonSeptember 14, 2015 at 6:13 PM

    That second to last stanza.

    And the last line about nostalgia. Good stuff.

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  7. AmnesiaSeptember 14, 2015 at 9:12 PM

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  8. UnknownSeptember 14, 2015 at 9:13 PM

    and I've always envied the leaves because at least they hit the ground at somepoint

    Keep your talent up

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  9. ZoeSeptember 14, 2015 at 10:25 PM

    "but I guess it's because the best stories are always behind our scars. "

    I like you and I really liked this post.

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  10. Charlie BlueSeptember 15, 2015 at 3:29 PM

    Love it

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  11. paige smalleySeptember 20, 2015 at 8:55 AM

    This was goooooood. Too good. Scary good.

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  12. Madeline McSeptember 24, 2015 at 8:53 PM

    "& i've always wondered why people mostly write poetry about heart break."

    they were right.

    this is your best.

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  13. Reagan CurtisNovember 7, 2015 at 2:04 PM

    stories and nostalgia and scars. so real.

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